Film Review

Today I did a film review. Well, not necessarily myself. I showed the film to one of my mom's coworkers at her job. I was not with him while he watched the film, and he wrote all of his notes on a notepad. The main thing he talked about was the sound. Since my team and I didn't wear mics while filming, some of the audio was very low. He said that he could still hear it but it would have been a better film if the audio was louder. He said many of the scenes were unnecessary and are just fillers where my team and I could have used film of us talking. He wrote down the exact thing that should be taken out and I will take that note back to my team. Some problems he also pointed out were about timing. He said that he could tell some scenes were initially longer but were edited and cut short. Some scenes are kind of choppy and should be deleted or edited properly. He also said that sometimes the lighting changed in the middle of the scenes since we were using natural lighting and the clouds would block the sun but was still good. He told me that he really liked the ending and how suspenseful it was. He enjoyed it and said it lived up to the thriller genre. I will take these notes back to my group and discuss everything with them. I hope everyone agrees with these changes so we can make this film as best it can be. I really appreciate his help and will take all of his notes in consideration.  I hope this film turns out great. I also hope that this film does very well.